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Music and life.
ReplyDeletePeople said that:
“Please,tell me who’re Ur friends,and I’ll tell who U’re”.
And I say:
“Tell me what music U’re fond of enjoining,And I’ll guess who U’re”.(About average 65-70% true,what’s a effective method)
Say with books,sneak on with proofs( That’s translation Made in… myself),the real English translation must be :To cite verse and chapter when speaking and produce evidence when informing)
For example:
1.If U said ,U’re a fan of Phú Quang’ songs.I guess U’re of Ha Noi origin or U love Ha Noi.(Right…Yeah...With Zel 100% right.haha)
2.U fall madly in love with Bon Jovi,Guns&Roses,Nirvana,The Wall,Mat xich,Da Vang..Certainly,U have the good health and the strong heart.(The deep heat of Rock ,especially Heavy Metal not for the Chicken-hearted persons).
In few years recently,in VN there're a lot of kinds of Music have joined Jazz,Hip-hop,Dance,Country.Arabella.Not to overplay but make a comparison that Vietnamese Music’s a MultiMedia Instant Soup.
When take a look round with MTV,KPOP(Pop in Seoul),or Russian Music i come to the following conclusion: Vietnamese Music’s rich,beautiful,delicious.With International intergration,we have the intergration of Cultural and the intergration of Music.
We should have the wide sight with Music,with new art of Music,for example:
Teen likes hip-hop,they dance,they wear Modern X-style Jeans…but they can learn well,love people,help others too.Hip-hop is not bad,and we watch on what Teens do than pay attention to what they wear.
All we must do now that enhance the taste of public.As I know to dance Hip-hop as an art need very serious practices and singers I mean Artist in America,Russian or Korea..,usually they must know very well about musical theory,they can themselves compose songs or play on one musical instrument as well .
All kinds of Music have own fans,as a child with lullaby of Mums and last song when we’re the citizen of another World.
Music is our life partner,right! ^^
My mother is an important person in my life for many reasons. She is a strong woman, very intelligent, and has a great heart.
ReplyDeleteFirst, my mother is a strong woman that always fights for what she wants. She believes that in life nothing comes easily. For example, she had to raise my brothers and I by herself due to the fact that my father was always traveling because of his type of work. She had a job, took care of us, and still found time to go to school.
Next, I admire my mother because of her intelligence. She is a very smart and well educated woman. She loves to read, and she also writes a lot. For example, she keeps a journal where she writes a little bit about everything including politics, religion, food, and much more. She likes to keep her mind busy, and she also likes to be informed about things that happen in the world.
Most important of all, she has a great heart. She is always trying to help everyone. For instance, every year she participates in voluntary events. She helps families to find jobs, collects food, books, and clothes for the poor. In addition, she is an amazing mother; a sweet and loving mother that is always here for us.
In conclusion, for these reasons I think my mother is a great person, and she inspires me a lot because she is very strong, intelligent, and has a great heart.
My mother is an important person in my life for many reasons. She is a strong woman, very intelligent, and has a great heart.
ReplyDeleteFirst, my mother is a strong woman that always fights for what she wants. She believes that in life nothing comes easily. For example, she had to raise my brothers and I by herself due to the fact that my father was always traveling because of his type of work. She had a job, took care of us, and still found time to go to school.
Next, I admire my mother because of her intelligence. She is a very smart and well educated woman. She loves to read, and she also writes a lot. For example, she keeps a journal where she writes a little bit about everything including politics, religion, food, and much more. She likes to keep her mind busy, and she also likes to be informed about things that happen in the world.
Most important of all, she has a great heart. She is always trying to help everyone. For instance, every year she participates in voluntary events. She helps families to find jobs, collects food, books, and clothes for the poor. In addition, she is an amazing mother; a sweet and loving mother that is always here for us.
In conclusion, for these reasons I think my mother is a great person, and she inspires me a lot because she is very strong, intelligent, and has a great heart.
I would like to have some topics about students
ReplyDeletei would like to have some topics about student's life
ReplyDeleteBlue, color I like
ReplyDeleteI love blue color. A most of many different color symbolize emotions and experiences. The life will be tiring and boring without blue color. The sky will not very high and large wide. Water see will not interesting and beautiful. Leafs and trees will not grow up and human not breathe. Blue takes us the genlly pace of life and friendly in nature. When blue appear eveything as lighter and it make to human hope in life. For me, blue is excellent and love this life. I always belief the color blue.
Blue, color I like
ReplyDeleteI love blue color. A most of many different color symbolize emotions and experiences. The life will be tiring and boring without blue color. The sky will not very high and large wide. Water see will not interesting and beautiful. Leafs and trees will not grow up and human not breathe. Blue takes us the genlly pace of life and friendly in nature. When blue appear evertyhing as lighter and it make to human hope in life. For me, blue is excellent and love this life. I always belief the color blue.
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My friend, he is a intelligent.
ReplyDeleteI have a interlligent friend in school. Not only does he study very well but also he play sport and some musical instrument. For example in the study, he alway gets good grades and exams easy. He was a most of good student at city who had two gold medal for math in home country and intertional exam. Beside study, he is a attacker in team football of school. He usualy gets score for his team. He runs very fast. Together with study, sport, he plays guitar and sing very well. Additional he play flute. He sings English song excellent. He is a telent person.
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The people of my country might have not forget the days we had to live in the dark and misery under the restrictive control of France Colonialism. therefore the August Revolution which helped us gain our independent and liberty is the important event in our country's history. And now, In stead of talking about the international event, I'll describe for you about the revolution to help you know more clearly about my country and its revolutionary tradition.
ReplyDeleteThe revolution of August took place in the nineteenth of august, 1945 and in all area of Vietnam. Immediately after the surrender of Japanese government, in the second of September, Ho Chi Minh-the president of Vietnam then proclaimed the Democratic republic of Vietnam. It was truly like a boom in happiness of my country's people. Because This success marked a new era for historical page. From that on, we could live in our own country with the independent and the fair, and no fear of invasion and plunder. In contrast, the event also refer to as the success of Indochina revolution. Not only people of my country but people in the world appreciated highly this event for the significance for all over the globe. It played an important role in the anti-fascism revolution and also was a sign of the old Colonialism in danger of collapse.
for only me, the August revolution raise the passion in my soul. I'm always feel proud of the power and union of my country whenever I tell this success for my foreign friend. Therefore, I have never forget reminding myself doing something even small to build my country more rich, more beautiful as the developed countries. only like that I just deserve to be a Vietnamese young generation.
In conclude, we should conserve our history and the traditional value of our country because it's neither a part of life nor a deep gratitude toward our ancestor.